Saturday, January 7, 2023

Did He Know?

Did he know?
Did he know he wasn't alone?
Did he know we were screaming his name for weeks?
Did he know a whole country was his family?
Did he know his picture is forever carved in my head?
Did he know we were with him while he was being tortured?
Did he know we were with him while they were placing the noose around his neck?
Did he know we were crying?
Did he know we won't forget him?
Did he know?

Seyed Mohammad Hosseini was arrested, sentenced to death in a sham trial because he knew martial arts, and executed. Since his parents died years ago, Mohammad lived alone. He was a simple worker and taught martial arts to children from poor families in his free time. After his arrest, he underwent severe torture for weeks. The Islamic Republic regime occupying Iran executed Mohammad before sunrise on January 7, 2023.



#MohammadHosseini




Wednesday, December 28, 2022

... said the editor: anthology 2022

The #book ... Said the Editor: Anthology 2022, created by Ava Safran, is an #anthology on #editing, in which several #writers and #editors have shared their knowledge and experience in the form of tips, essays, and instructions, on #writing and #editing. It holds information about #grammar, usage, POV, and #style, all valuable to any #writer who intends to #publish. 


... Said the Editor: Anthology 2022

https://www.amazon.com/Said-Editor-Anthology-2022-ebook/dp/B0BR5ZN6YD/


... Said the Editor: Anthology 2021 

https://www.amazon.com/said-editor-anthology-2021-ebook/dp/B09PFHYKDT/


Sunday, December 25, 2022

Em Dash / En Dash

Dash

A dash is a little horizontal line in the middle of a line of text. 

In this post, I will explain how to use dashes — em dashes and en dashes.

In this post, I will explain how to use dashes—em dashes and en dashes.

I worked on this post for five hours — from 6 to 11 this morning.

Sections 1–2 are a kind of introduction.

Sections 3–4 explain the uses of dashes.

Read sections 1–4; they’re all important.

Dash versus Underscore

Note that I said “in the middle” and not at the bottom. The line that goes at the bottom is called an underscore. 

A dash looks like – or —, but an underscore looks like _. 

Dash versus Hyphen

A dash is longer than a hyphen, which is used to separate parts of a word. 

A dash looks like – or —, but a hyphen looks like -.

Types of Dashes

There are two forms of dashes commonly used — em dash and en dash.

Note that I used an em dash in my sentence, between the words used and em dash.

First, I want you to pay attention to the way I put space between my words “used” and “em” and the em dash. That’s one way of writing it. Many people prefer to write this same sentence like this: 

There are two forms of dashes commonly used—em dash and en dash. 

Whether or not you use space around your em dash depends on your style guide and your choice. Both are correct. Whichever you choose, make sure you’re consistent throughout your text.

Second, I want you to know that I could have used a colon in this sentence instead of an em dash.

There are two forms of dashes commonly used: em dash and en dash. 

Both are correct. I personally prefer to use an em dash instead of a colon unless I’m writing an academic paper.

The em dash has the same length as the letter M (—), and the en dash has the same length as the letter N (–). These dashes don’t just differ in length, though; they also serve different functions in a sentence.

Em Dash 

Em dashes can replace commas or parentheses that separate information that is not essential to understand the sentence. 

She asked her instructor, Noosha Ravaghi, to explain this grammar feature.

She asked her instructor (Noosha Ravaghi) to explain this grammar feature.

She asked her instructor — Noosha Ravaghi — to explain this grammar feature.

Once he finally gathered enough money to buy the laptop (four months after he first saw it) he no longer needed it.

Once he finally gathered enough money to buy the laptop — four months after he first saw it — he no longer needed it.

When she found the errors in the text (all thirty of them) the editor decided to proofread the manuscript once again.

When she found the errors in the text — all thirty of them — the editor decided to proofread the manuscript once again.

Em dashes can replace a colon before an item or a list of items.

There are two forms of dashes commonly used: em dash and en dash. 

There are two forms of dashes commonly used — em dash and en dash. 

Em dashes are often used in pairs, unless they separate information that is at the end of a sentence; in that case the punctuation mark at the end of the sentence will signal the end of that piece of information.

I like to go swimming in the summer — my favorite season.

In the winter — my least favorite season — I stay at home and read.

When em dashes are used to mark a break in a sentence instead of a colon or even a semi-colon, they are often used for emphasis or to signal a change in tone. Keep in mind that using dashes is less formal that using other punctuation marks, so em dashes should not replace other punctuation marks in academic writing or any other formal text.

In a conversation, an em dash can be used to show an abrupt break whereas an ellipsis might indicate trailing off.

My dogs are little monst—

Some may use an em dash before an author’s name in a quote.

"You should never have more than two em dashes in one sentence."

— Noosha Ravaghi

En Dash

En dashes are slightly shorter in length than em dashes. Also, en dashes have an entirely different function. The en dash is used between numbers (dates, page numbers, etc.) and means to or through.

Albert Camus (1913–1960) was awarded the Nobel Prize in Literature in 1957.

I told my students to do exercises 2–6 for tomorrow.

Make sure to use en dashes, not hyphens, for numerical ranges like these.

Also, in phrases such as from… to… and between… and…, it’s important to keep the word “to” or “and” instead of using an en dash, because it will affect the parallel structure in the sentence.

She lived in this town from 1995 to 1998.

Between 5 and 7, I was watching a movie.

The en dash is also used in the meaning of to or and to show relationships, scores, or directions.

The teacher–student connection is important.

They won the game 4–1.

The Paris–Rome train leaves in 30 minutes.

Typing the Dashes

Typing the dashes can be a little tricky.

Here are two simple options:

1 - Copy them from here and paste them where you need them:

em dash = —    en dash = – 

2 - Type your text in a Google doc. 

Google doc makes typing en and em dashes easy:

Use two hyphens back to back for an en dash.

Use three hyphens back to back for an em dash.

Wednesday, December 21, 2022

Four Years Later

Four years ago today, on December 21, 2018, I started a big project, building a cabin. Today, I am happy to announce that I finally finished it, all of it, including its sunroom. 

Everything between 2018 and 2022 is in my memoir Reflections: A Journey of Transformation (by Afarin Rava).

I had to learn, every step of the way, what to do and how to do it because I had no previous knowledge about construction. For this reason, I consider building this cabin one of my longest projects and biggest accomplishments.

Friday, November 25, 2022

For Freedom

Over the last few weeks, as most of my friends in the writing community on Twitter know, I've spent countless hours tweeting, retweeting, and translating tweets from Persian into English so that my non-Iranian friends — and strangers — can understand what's going on in Iran, the country where I was born. 

Reading these tweets and articles has been emotionally exhausting for me because I feel everything, and I can't detach myself from the events, but I can't stop either because writing / translating is the least I can do to help my sisters and brothers who are fighting the Islamic Republic terrorists in Iran. In fact, this is all I can do. 

I've always been clear about where I stand. I am with the people of Iran and support them in every way I can. Why? Because I've lived in occupied Iran, and there's nothing good about it. The Islamic Republic government is made up of a bunch of nobodies who, in the weakest moment of Iran, nearly forty-four years ago, found an opportunity to invade the country and reign over the land and its people.

The Islamic Republic regime, a theocracy, has never had any respect for life and/or human rights. It has especially taken away women’s rights. A woman in Iran is not allowed to wear what she wants; she must cover her hair and her body. A woman cannot get divorced unless her husband wants a divorce, and good luck to any woman who wants to get custody of her child(ren). In a court of law, two women’s testimony counts as one man’s testimony. A woman cannot travel without a man’s permission; if a woman is married, her husband decides whether or not she can travel; if she is unmarried, her father makes this decision. 

The Islamic Republic regime has destroyed Iran’s economy. While most people have been struggling to provide a shelter and other basic necessities for themselves and their children, just trying to live a normal life, the corrupt government officials have been seizing people’s properties and stealing the country’s riches, transferring these stolen goods out of the country, and filling their Swiss bank accounts for themselves and their offspring, who mostly live in other countries because — irony — Iran is no longer a good place to live. The economy is generally bad, and it gets worse with each step the terrorist government takes: Once any official’s actions affect other countries, sanctions are imposed on Iran — sanctions whose impact is only on the Iranian people, not on the corrupt officials responsible.

The Islamic Republic regime’s judiciary system is a joke. They make up laws all the time — laws for the people — and none of these laws apply to them. They arrest, torture, rape, and murder anyone they want, anytime they want. If any official — or any relative of an official — breaks the law, they will not be prosecuted, but if anyone outside of their family breaks the law, the most common verdict is the death penalty. In court, if they don't feel like it, they won't allow attorneys. People are killed daily for practicing a religion other than the regime’s version of Islam, for being gay, for fighting any injustice, and sometimes for nothing at all. It's basically the law of the jungle, and the government officials have all the power. 

Over the last four decades, the people of Iran have started protests against this corrupt regime several times, and each time, the Islamic Republic government has murdered a large number of protesters. The last time was three years ago, and that number was 1,500 people — in a matter of days — in November 2019.

This year, specifically in September 2022, a young woman named Mahsa Jina Amini, from Saqqez, Iran, went to Tehran, the capital, for a visit. The Islamic Republic forces — the so-called morality police (I’m not making this up; that’s what they call themselves) — arrested her because her hair wasn’t covered properly. Three days later, she was dead. The people once again stood up and spoke out in protest, and this protest was different — different because it was led by women, mostly young women and teenagers, and because the people never stopped. People’s protests started on September 16, 2022, the day Mahsa Jina Amini died, and they still continue today, November 25, 2022. Two weeks after it all started, people knew this was no longer a protest: It was a revolution.

Since September 16, 2022, over a thousand people, including over fifty children, have been killed. Thousands have been injured. And over fifteen thousand people have been arrested. The arrested protesters have been — and are still being — raped and tortured in prison. The prisons in Iran are now full of writers, artists, journalists, human rights activists, lawyers, and students. Many people have been abducted from their homes and taken to unknown locations. Many people have been killed in their homes. All these victims’ family members are being threatened by the terrorist state to keep their silence; they are being coerced to give untrue statements to the media about how their loved ones died. Some still tell the truth, and bad things happen to their families.

The regime’s forces steal people’s dead bodies and charge their families obscene amounts of money in exchange for the bodies of their loved ones, and the families have no choice but to pay because they want to bury them and give them proper funerals. They do many unspeakable things. There is no limit to the Islamic Republic regime’s atrocities. I am in the process of putting together an outline for a book because it is my responsibility, as a writer, to tell these stories — and I’m sure many other people are finding ways to tell the world what happened.

The government has all the power because they have weapons. People try to protest peacefully but get attacked — shot at, beaten with batons, thrown from buildings, etc. — at every turn. They have to fight armed terrorists, a.k.a. the Islamic Republic regime forces — also called “security forces” — with their bare hands. The only weapons people have are the rocks and stones they find on the ground and a few household items. In Iran, people do not carry weapons; there are no stores that sell guns; regular people do not have access to guns. Many of these “security forces” wear plain clothes and walk among people with the sole mission to identify the protesters so that the forces can later go abduct them or murder them in their homes. It’s stones against guns and military weapons. It’s innocent protesters seeking basic rights against evil terrorists.

The government also has agents in other countries, including the United States. Shortly after the revolution in Iran started — toward the end of September — I started tweeting about it. Since then, many people have contacted me, asking me to translate, write, and edit pieces of writing for various websites and social media platforms, all in the name of helping the people of Iran. Of course, some Iranians living in the US are, in fact, trying to help the people in any way they can, just like I am. However, there are also said agents, like the people affiliated with NIAC, an organization that supports the Islamic Republic and uses the media to distort the truth and hide the regime’s crimes. 

It’s hard to tell who contacts me and what their intentions are, but to anyone who has reached out to me, and there have been quite a few, I have made it a point to immediately and explicitly state that the people in Iran should stop being peaceful and start killing the terrorists because this is war. I know this puts me in some danger, but when it comes to corruption and injustice, I want to be as clear in my private conversations as I am publicly in my tweets, and I want to be loud. This regime must go, one way or another. Whether the officials stay in Iran to kill more people and end up being killed or leave Iran to crawl back in the hole they came out of almost forty-four years ago, the regime must and will go. Those who flee must know that we the people will eventually find them and hold them accountable for the crimes they have committed.

The people of Iran fight, knowing they might get killed. They are sacrificing themselves for democracy, mostly for their children and future generations. They are ending this violation of human rights at any cost. Victory is near.


Tuesday, November 22, 2022

Indiana Joes

The #book Indiana Joes is now available on #Amazon, in both #Kindle and paperback!

https://amazon.com/dp/B0BMTHBWJ9

This book is a short #memoir about COFFEE & PIE, the drink and not the baked dish but the Program for Intensive English at Indiana University, where I taught for six weeks in summer 2022, my students, and their project.




Wednesday, October 5, 2022

Saadi Shirazi

Human beings are parts of each other, 

For in creation, they are from the same gem. 

If hard times cause one part pain, 

Other parts will not restful remain. 

You who are indifferent to others’ suffering 

Are not worthy of the name human.

                                                        Saadi Shirazi

Saturday, October 1, 2022

Be Their Voice / Say Her Name

Women and men are protesting side by side in the streets of Iran to get their country back from the current government, a.k.a. murderers. They are fighting for freedom, for women's rights, for a normal life. They have named their revolution #WomanLifeFreedom. All they ask of us, the rest of the world, is to share the events happening in Iran, so that said murderers see our brave women and men are not alone.

All of this started with the murder of #MahsaAmini by the "morality" police (don't get me started on the irony here).

Each one of you can help. The simplest way is to retweet the following song, by #ShervinHajipour, a young artist who got arrested because he collected people's tweets, tweets that stated why they joined this revolution, and sang it. We don't know if Shervin is alive or dead, but his song has now become the song of the revolution. It's called Baraye, which in Farsi means "For"... as in For Freedom.

You can hashtag the artist's name: #ShervinHajipour
Or you can hashtag the name of the revolution: #WomanFreedomLife
Or you can hashtag the name of the twenty-two-year-old innocent girl who got beaten to death that started all of this: #MahsaAmini

Or you can hashtag all three, along with the retweet of the song:

#MahsaAmini
#WomanLifeFreedom
#ShervinHajipour



Here's the song with its lyrics in English: https://youtu.be/FAeNCddonTc