Saturday, September 30, 2023

A Dictionary

I was recently looking for a word online and accidentally discovered The Dictionary of Obscure Sorrows by John Koenig. The word lover in me couldn't resist and found a way to justify the purchase of this unnecessary item: a gift to myself for my upcoming birthday. 

It's a fascinating book. Check it out...
Or at least watch the author's TED Talk (link below):

The conquest of new words | John Koenig | TEDxBerkeley
https://youtu.be/ANFQPEkczYc?si=0ATKRzRAFin2EuZM



Tuesday, September 5, 2023

A Driving Force

Music has an incredible power to ignite social change and be a catalyst for positive transformation. It transcends language and cultural barriers, connecting people from all walks of life. Through its melodies, lyrics, and rhythms, music has the ability to inspire, educate, and mobilize communities towards a common cause. It has been a driving force in numerous important movements throughout history, amplifying voices and shedding light on various social issues like inequality, injustice, and discrimination. By evoking emotions and sparking conversations, music has the remarkable ability to unite individuals, ignite empathy, and ultimately pave the way for a more inclusive and compassionate society.

https://youtu.be/7ChZablq2OY?si=ckyQI2ZDt6Rkqgl8


Mehdi Yarrahi was arrested one week ago, four days after the release of his song. The revolution in Iran continues, stronger than ever, as we approach the anniversary of Mahsa Amini's death on September 16. 
#WomanLifeFreedom

Thursday, August 10, 2023

Summer Samplings

I volunteered to teach interested teenagers a summer writing class at my local library for an hour a week in summer 2023. I created a workbook — containing some basic information, the types of writing, a few grammar lessons, exercises, several useful tips on editing, and so on — and promised my potential students I would publish their completed work in an anthology.

Only a few people registered, and only half of them were teenagers, but each had a story to tell. Four students completed their stories, edited them, and allowed me to create a tiny anthology titled Summer Samplings — “Samplings” because each piece of writing is a sample of a bigger project in the works.

https://www.amazon.com/dp/B0CF45D51V



Monday, August 7, 2023

Book Review: Kellcey

Kellcey, by Kacey Kells, is an honest memoir, in which the author chronicles the highlights of her childhood, illustrating her state of mind at the time of her first serious relationship during her teenage years, describes a sexual assault she suffers in great detail, reflecting why rape is one of the most underreported crimes, and finally gives an account of the effects of this traumatic event on her life.

This touching story, the author's insight, and the flow of words make Kellcey a fascinating read, despite its editing issues. I recommend this book to everyone, male and female, and give it five stars.

Thursday, July 27, 2023

Dear Twelve-Year-Old Me: Anthology

I'm thrilled to announce that the anthology I created as Afarin Rava (a pen name made from the last part of my first name and the first part of my last name: nooshafarin ravaghi) is now available on Amazon: https://www.amazon.com/Dear-Twelve-Year-Old-Anthology-Afarin-Rava/dp/B0CC7D4Z4H/

I had the honor and privilege to work with over thirty writers who, hoping to make a positive change in the world, contributed their valuable life experiences and advice to children and adolescents. This book is a collection of priceless life lessons shared by random people, each of whom wished they could reach out to their twelve-year-old self and whisper their precious lessons in a way that their younger self would hear, believe, and learn.

Many thanks to B.H. Arias, P.D. Austin, Jerome Berglund, Mike Bowerbank, RocĂ­o del Mar, Holly Dobbie, Hannah Downey, Glenna Gill, Ilya Gutlin, Claude Inkwell, Althea Hogsett, Karen Hoffman, Margaret Lindsay Holton, Roberta Beach Jacobson, Heather Lynn, IA McCleery, Kelly Miller, Sallie Moffitt, Danielle Moody, Natasha Morningstarr, Chris Palmore, Diane Riley, Nina Romano, Gloria Worley Ruberry, Edward Selender, Claire Sheehy, Leif E. Slusher, Paul Spalding-Mulcock, Vicky Whedbee, Peter B. Williams, Charles Dan Worley, and Wanda L. Worley, whose contributions brought this book to life.




Thursday, June 22, 2023

The Perfect Book?

I write daily, mostly in the morning, while I drink my morning tea. I have different blogs. When I have finished reading a delightful book, I may review the book and post my thoughts on nooshasblog.blogspot.com. Each Wednesday, I post a letter of appreciation on my gratitude-girl blog, gratigi.blogspot.com. Every day, I add a short post to my blog afarinrava.blogspot.com: a motivational quote, a grammar feature, a line from one of my books, a photo, or a review of one of my books. If I have a work in progress, I spend at least half an hour writing or editing that.

“If you don't have time to read, you don't have the time (or the tools) to write. Simple as that.”
Stephen King

I have written and published three books, all memoirs, and each has taught me a great deal about book writing. Fully aware that my books hardly near a perfect book, I have tried to do my personal best every time, and I hope that enough practice will help me improve my work and allow me to produce a work that approaches the ideal writing and reading experience.

I began writing when I first learned to trace the letters of the alphabet and form words, at the age of six, but writing to publish — which happened first when I became an editor and later when I published my own work — trained me to look at a book from a reader’s point of view. With that added perspective, I try to avoid all the nuisances I experience and to implement all I enjoy as an avid reader. I consider it my responsibility to the reader. 

Author Responsibilities

Fonts & Spacing

I edit books for a living, and my hobbies include reading and writing. All of that takes a toll on my eyes, so I no longer buy, borrow, or read books with small print: I like large fonts. I also like to have enough space between the lines on a page. Why add pressure on my eyes? And why do that to my readers?

Chapter Length

Books that have short chapters work better for me as a reader. I prefer putting a book down after I complete a chapter to leaving it in the middle of a chapter, and with my busy schedule, I like books with shorter chapters better. 

Cover

The cover of a book should be attractive, but it should also be related to the content in a way. I have seen book covers that attract attention just for the sake of attracting attention and that have nothing to do with the message of the book.


These constitute only three aspects of book writing that make the reading experience more enjoyable for the reader. Authors have more important responsibilities to their readers, two of which I value the most: honesty & clarity.

Honesty

“Good writing can be defined as having something to say and saying it well.”
Edward Abbey

I enjoy reading most genres but find myself spending more time on nonfiction, and mostly on memoirs. In a memoir, I want the author to be honest, and not just with the reader. I have read personal accounts in which the author assigns blame to everyone and takes no responsibility for anything. That does not work for me. I want the author to admit they have made a mistake, to take responsibility for their actions, to learn a valuable lesson, and to teach me, the reader, that lesson. 

Clarity

Clear communication requires correct grammar and specific word choice. 

“It’s not wise to violate the rules until you know how to observe them.”
T.S. Eliot

Grammar refers to all the rules that form the entire system and structure of a language, including punctuation. 

Word choice refers to the use of precise language that conveys the exact intended message.

Without grammar rules and the right vocabulary in a written work, the reader will not have experience the clarity needed for proper communication. The best writers master the language they write in. Those who may not have the tools (knowledge and experience) to revise their work properly should hire an editor to ensure their writing follows all the grammar rules and transfers the right meaning to the reader. All writers should have their work proofread.

I find it useful to put the manuscript aside for a month and re-read it with fresh eyes. It helps the author discover the holes and inconsistencies in their writing. The author may also find sentences that they could have expressed in a better way, more effectively and/or more concisely, and rewrite them.

A suitable amount of editing results in a well-organized, consistent, and coherent piece of writing, free from mistakes and errors, which flows well from beginning to end. I would appreciate such a work as a reader, so I hope to, one day, create such a work as a writer. 


Wednesday, June 21, 2023

Summer

Summer is officially here... but summer has different definitions depending on the location. To me, summer used to mean entire Sundays on the beach, but now, here, the weather has been so hot lately, and the air so full of insects, that besides my evening walk with the dogs, which I look forward to every day, I leave my cabin as little as possible.

This works out just fine with my three ongoing book projects, including the anthology many of my writer friends contributed to, plus a writing class that I teach until the end of summer. 

I have a few books on my to-read list for the summer. I started the first one, Kellcey (by Kacey Kells) several days ago, but given all the editing I'm doing during the day, my progress is slow, so it will take me a while to finish it and post a review. I was also hoping to have another Marco Ocram masterpiece by this summer to put on my reading list, but it seems there are no new books by the author. 

Happy Summer!